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As I watch all these
People pass,
I cannot help but wonder
Do they know we’re all
Made of glass?

Have they heard the silent tone
After we carelessly rushed to break
Against hearts of stone
Although we knew what’s at stake?

Do they know the price
He had to pay
Just to make her stay
Just one more day?

Have they felt the little girl bleeding?
If tears left scars her face would be full of them,
Because she was pleading
But the woman beside her never woke up.

As I watch all these
People pass
I cannot help but wonder
Do they know how fragile is
That little beating part
How fragile is
A human heart?
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I wrote this quite some time ago, but I remember thinking how sometimes we know our hearts will get broken, but never the less we do it. And sometimes I guess those who break your heart don't even know they did something wrong. Which only makes it worse.

Here is a link for a picture that was partially my inspiration. If tears left scars. [link]
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:icondanijel-knez:
Mood: Sadness *Danijel-Knez Mar 29, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Beautiful poem...
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~MauraGreen Mar 29, 2013  Hobbyist
Thanks!
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~twiggy248 Feb 25, 2013  Hobbyist
Very emotional, you did an amazing job !! I love the concept, as I have wondered the same thing before, but you put it into better words that I ever could have!!
The last line "That little beating part How fragile is A human heart?" very strong, and the perfect ending to this piece, and also my favorite line, haha!! :P
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~MauraGreen Feb 25, 2013  Hobbyist
I'm happy you enjoyed it so much, that means a lot. :) And thank you for the fave.
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~twiggy248 Feb 25, 2013  Hobbyist
You are very welcome (:
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Mood: Emotional ~Luzulu Feb 19, 2013  Student General Artist
this was hard hitting and beautifully done.
This:
Have they felt the little girl bleeding?
If tears left scars her face would be full of them,
Because she was pleading
But the woman beside her never woke up.

I just can't, it's sad, very sad
Loved this
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~MauraGreen Feb 19, 2013  Hobbyist
Thank you, I'm glad you liked it. I really didn't believe it would left such an impact.
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